v/ Patrown
I liked this battle. Patrown provided a dope lil character sketch and ended with a little flourish of profundity and like black said it was a lil open ended and vague but imo this worked to your benefit in a way. Let the reader find out for himself and shit. Adonis obvi a strong writer but your verse was a little too cryptic for me this week and that might just be a fault with me and not you because your writing is dope, just felt a bit disconnected to me this week is all. Good writers and a good battle
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