Vote will be brief. On my phone.
Dam: I thought it was kinda when I read the topic and saw how long your verse was lol. As for the writing, it was mostly good. There were a few parts towards the beginning specifically that fucked up the flow. Besides that it was good.
Diode: This was short and to the point with very descriptive language. That being said I agree with Adonis bout the opening lines. Still, you shined with a direct approach where as Dam's verse began to linger on to me.
V/Diode good battle
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