[Adonis]

Dam - flashes, the majority rather, held stand out flow. Near the bottom quarter it was much more choppy and unpleasent and seemed rushed, the meat however read easy, kept a very nice pace, and jjust flowed off the toungue. Then this in the begining...."or ever was partly dishonest" wtf? There were similar misshaps in the first 4 bars, but llike I said, the meat of the verse really did make up for the rest. As for take on topic, theoretically nice topic, but it felt ruushed as a finished product. So...execution was off a bit I guess.

Furèr- I liked the ending, shhattered glass/broken truth. The flow in bottom half was good, did not enjoy the opening lines flow. Too stretched for my taste. This was short,, no doubt rushed which seems a recurring theme thus far. Your take on topic is witty, you literally explained that awkward silince in my minnd, pretty smart. But it wasnnt the awkward silinence, it was lovers at that breaking point before the tears flow. Good shit.

Tough vote. DAM had the longe piece which usually benifits a writer, but his more, all meant more flaws. Diode on the other hand kept it concise, using the topic perfectly with solidd execution ccuz I see the talk between lovers and caan imagine that silience

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