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Old 11-30-2013, 01:45 AM   #7
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I had to look up enjambment. It's a lot easier to spot when I don't write in paragraphs. I hate that people, whether negatively or positively, see it as any big deal to write in 'paragraphs'. The style is much more fluid. Dropping down makes most people too structured. They forget they don't HAVE to end the thought there. Shruuuuugs.

I love that you point out logistic mistakes in my verses, it let's me know that when I do actually put forth the effort to have it make sense that someone will notice.

ill nika isn't the brightest crayon.

Thanks for noticing me.
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