Thread: "Inner Daemon"
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Old 11-29-2013, 01:08 PM   #9
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I liked it, good read
Enjoyed the different structure.
I felt the concept was awesome, great idea.
I also felt the ending was kinda not set up enough, came to sudden
Awesome drop though,
Always be a writer I read.
The most stand out piece I've read from you was:
I think: A Girl deflowererd, cant remember the title.
It was about a serial rapist/killer killing a young girl
shit was chilling.
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