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Originally Posted by Genocide
Objective. You need to take more risks. Get outside of the norm.
The name change is ok I guess. But honestly.. you need to branch out somehow. Mechanically and conceptually.
Keep writing
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Not a namechange but this is me taking risks, hah! And I was also interested to see what Veritas got to say about me naming and personifying mental issues which I suspected he'd pick up, but he hasn't so I'm kind of disappointed that he, as the forum-shrink, hasn't even mentioned it. Makes me wonder whether he takes a step back before he's exposed or not. Or perhaps he's just observing and making some kind of an evaluation of some sort, I don't know, but I'm still interested to see what he got to say.
Either way; I definitely feel what you're saying about it though, just trying out some different shit. No excuses, but my life has improved quite a bit lately and I feel like it's taking its toll on how I write as well. I don't really feel like I need an abstract outlet for my negative emotions which was at its peak during ISTL, I'm trying to handle living a positive life which I haven't been able to do before and be able to get rid of the last bit of negativity within me which I'm trying to do here and really put shit to light. Hah, everything in this verse is as real as it gets although exaggerated here and there (my past and story has been used by child services anonymously in presentations and I nearly made one of my shrinks cry when I told her about the flaws in the way she was dealing with me and how it could potentially lead to suicide if I had been someone else, and another one yelled at me to get the fuck out of her office(yes, she sweared and I was 12 at the time) and some other dude prescribed anti-depressants to me and went on a leave without telling), kinda similar to the realest shit-verse you posted a few days ago that I haven't left any feed on yet, but I'll come back to it. Deranged Change is simply put a side of me that makes me do crazy shit, although not Beretta-crazy, but crazy enough that the cops sent for psych eval rather than a cell at one point and my case isn't different from what a lot of other people deal with; hence the ''product of modern society''-line, should'a made that more clear though and I've went back'n'forth between diagnosis given earlier. The rest is self-explanatory.
Thanks a lot for the honest feed, you got me thinking quite a bit about what route I want to take with my written-pieces. Also; I don't take anything I, or others, post to heart in a bad way so no bad blood or anything like that if you, or anyone else, would think I'd take the feedback emotionally. I mean; I've repeated my story to strangers enough times already cuz I had to and I've been criticized by just as many so me posting shit up here means nothing to me emotionally if you know what I mean? (Felt I had to add it just in case, some people are soft and might think ''oh shit, maybe I said something wrong'', just letting you know that you didn't just in case). In other words; What you said is appreciated a lot! Words from people of your caliber is stuff I take into serious consideration. Hopefully my future pieces will be more enjoyable reads.
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dull boy: Yet, that character is as real as it gets no matter how boring and predictable it is. More than most people can say about their aliases, it got to count for something? If not; Oh well, not a big deal tbh.