Vulgar... For some reason this reminded me of the Chris Tucker character doing an announcement for that paradise planet in The 5th Element movie. To be brief this was too vulgar and not Vulgar enough. You through in unnecessary potty humor and not enough crazy lyrical prowess.
Vag... I am impressed, straight up, this is the most enjoyable piece I've read from you yet. Thouroughly enjoyable all the way to the last stanza when it turned to some Sumerian-esque odd names that could have been left out, they just seemed out of place. But I did very much like the deification of the astrological objects that weren't front and center of the picture.
Vote - Vag
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