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NYCSPITZ um... That was patrown, not me lol... Anyway though...
Pat, I'm going to assume you rushed this piece, honestly, it seemed just unfinished, where you were goingwith the topic, anthropomorphizing the tree into the family sense could have been killer, but, yea, I know you're better than this bro
Mike, nice flow through out, well rounded story, has some real nice readability, more audio style than usual...
im just a passenger,wait, I want off of this ride,
caught in a downward spiral that I thought id survive,
my pride ignored the facts as they started to mount up,
now im overflowing with depression, im about to erupt,
Loved these lines, but yea, this match was pretty much one sided
Vote - Mike