Vulgar: It seems like you're getting a bit of negative feedback from the voters, but I disagree with them. This shows another aspect of your writing which I've never seen and that's humor, and good usage of dialogue. I think this was a huge risk to take as pieces like this of a character just ranting or not following with a straightforward story rarely gets voted on in these leagues, but I enjoyed this.
Vivid: Your style is like no one else in the league and I'm reminded that each time I read a verse of yours. This story was crazy and I mean that in a good way because, well because I'm crazy I suppose. But I'd have to say the one negative I found with your verse was its length. While Vulgar's was direct to the point, yours lingered a little longer than I think it should have as it began to drag towards the end to me.
V/Vulgar Great battle fellas.
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