I have croc & sugar shane from neigh. rest were good worded punches in a readers aspect but felt lackluster in a battling format. meaning it didn't have strong enough wording imo to penetrate a opponent but it's something I'd enjoy reading, if that makes sense.
I find dominate word play stretch. tho I went back to read some of his older battles & saw in most cases he pulled it off pretty nicely. case & point - the doodle line was nice, it took me 3 reads to see what you were doing but I got it. but I thought the following line Polaroid, was a stretch.. didn't dig at all.
I felt dom verse just hit stronger as a whole than neighs. big bang theory, etch a scetch, lather/milk backwas, bucj tooth,wording of everything was a more enjoyable read. neigh had great wording, just didn't hit strong to me. I got the feel it was more of a showcase of what he can do w.wording things rather than what he can do w. wording things wbile attacking his opponent.. like it was more in vain. dope nevertheless, but yea imnot going to keep reiterating.. lls.
vote dom
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