[Mike Wrecka]

dope battle guys

Vulgar - I liked what you did here. the turtle was given a personality and the destruction of the human race was detailed. the sea creatures were given a voice and able to express their displeasure with all the things that our race is responsible for. the turtle carried the weight of the world on his shoulders so to speak so good use of the picture. some good rhyming in this but the verse felt short to me. I needed it to keep going. overall quite enjoyable.

Vividlyvague - I was wrong in the magazine. I said that this topic favored vulgar. after reading these I see that it actually favored you. it is a very vague picture, we don't really know what the fuck is going on, and you are known as a vague writer. you and the topic meshed well. I really liked this verse. you maintained the tone of the picture as were you opponent wrote in a different tone. you had the same vibe in your writing as the picture. it was vague, it was strange, it was otherworldly. probably my favorite piece ive read from you. the rhyme structure was quite complex. good use of multis. it flowed nicely. dope stuff.

overall- good battle. vulgar seemed a bit uninspired and wrote short. vivid seemed to step up to the plate and delivered in the clutch. I got him here. for better and more complex rhyme structure and for capturing the essence and tone of the picture more precisely. thanks for the reads gentlemen.

vote - vividlyvague