Vulgar, this didn't see. Like typical Vulgar. Which is good and bad in a way. For the most part, I liked it. The comedy mixed in was cool at parts, I pictured this weird creature at a podium actually saying all this, haha. Vivid, I had to read the vote before me because I didn't want to be alone in my feeling. I did the exact same thing mordycai did, funny. Had to read it again to let it sink in. I kind of like the route you went, liked the heaven vs. Hell kind of vibe I got from it. Your style is not entirely easy for me, I got lost at points. But won't hold it too much against you. This was a tough one to vote on but I gotta go vivid by a hair.
Vote Vivid
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