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Old 11-23-2013, 03:17 PM   #9
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Lmfao @ mordycai's ending. Slick shit bro, you touched on a lot of interesting material...completely different approach from ZYG and I think it worked out well. ZYG to me though just came way more polished in this battle, he had a dope lil aesop like vibe to the piece and the ending with the fox trapping the octopus (sly lil fucker) was just hilarious imo. For the better story and more advanced storytelling elements I'm gonna give this one to zygote

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