F4 line is okayish, dead mother line doesnt really connect, shakespeare line doesnt have any kind of punch in it, wealth of information line is worded well, but doesnt construct of any wordplay, flash line was cool, but i felt like it couldve been executed better, chozen line was an okay closer
roof line was dope, whether or not it's bitten isn't for me to say - bud light line was eh...if you didnt like bud light, you wouldnt drink a keg - shelter line is solid - wasnt really feeling the small change line, and the broom line was kinda wack. The fall tourney concept wasnt really worded effectively at all
I feel like CTRL started out strong and his verse depreciated over time. Nik wasn't really utilizing a lot of effective concepts...most of it came off as fillerish. I think in a battler, both sides could improve on actually having at least one punch per every 2 lines
but the one standout line was the roof line, and that tipped the vote
MVGT - CTRL4
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