No one's doubtin you're Aussie.. any punch you string up is nonsense
I mean, this faggot's wrestled w/ a croc EVERY time he's had to think of a concept
-I liked this. Solid punch, good execution
& your girl's down to deep throat me 'til her jawbone gets damaged
That bitch lies on her back & does grunt work that'd undercut most auto mechanics
- This was just ok to me. As usual, you executed it well but it didn't hit hard.
Stick C4 to your front door.. this pussy blindfolded w/ both arms tied
I'll put a packet to IP address that'll send him straight to a Cloud when it goes online
- Not a fan of the letter name plays....don't think you are either. So, I was surprised to see this. All the connections were cool but I didn't think this hit either.
Ruin ya plans.. act untouchable, I'm on the next flight w/ Uzis in hand
It's nothin to get you drawn & quartered across the border like the Vetruvian Man
- Ehhh. Just ok to me.
Heard you went to the clinic, but givin head's like your reason to live
This fag's idea of a tissue culture's the shrine in his bedroom made of Kleenex & jizz
- I thought this was good. I did have to look up tissue culture, but I liked this.
You got carried in TTT, then tried givin ya broham the third degree?
Ain't even land anything & still slowed up Aer traffic worse than Homeland Security
- I've seen wayyyyyy to many Aer/Air concepts in the past few months.
This ain't a classic, it's painful.. watchin you get battered & mangled
We all know you're Sugar Shane, punches'll put you in retirement like his match w/ Canelo
- I didn't know his name was Shane. Would've liked to see another flip or connection along with the name instead of just a fight reference. Normally you have like 8 connections in one line.
Run up w/ the mask.. let you take a swing before I murder ya set of twins
& the second Domicile make sure the ceiling's their brains' new permanent residence
- The wp works but this didn't hit for me. He has twins and you're going to kill them? I'd like to see something more direct and I think you could've done that with the domicile wp.
I throw the beastliest shots, so catchin a win here's the easiest odds
I'm the go-to decision.. or there's a Bigg Rigg in this fight worse than the one GSP robbed
- Had to look up the reference cause I don't follow mma. Not really feeling it. Would've rather seen a play on an actual big rigg.... like the truck.
U get ripped off buying groceries. That story made u look like a faggot brah
I mean, you Spaced Out & got Jewed Law… and I ain’t talkin bout Gattaca
- Kinda cool. Got all the connections but didn't have much sting.
Your mom’s a dating site slut. Tell her stank ass to hit the showers
Anyone that Smelt that bitch or Mackerel be back on Plenty of Fish within hours
- The smelt/type of fish reference I wasn't familiar with until a google. I'm guessing Plenty of Fish is a dating diet...kinda feel the same as the first. I like all the different connections but didn't hit too hard.
Neigh’s pussy & a wretched vet. He’ll go into hiding when the techs are flexed
Pfft… I’ll shake ‘em up and this Doodle disappear like a fuckin etch a sketch
Seems like it could be played but this was decent enough. I can't remember seeing it.
You juice & get assfucked. Either could put u in shock & have ya heart in pain
Fuck it, stay taking a Pole or Roid… u’ll get the picture when u start to shake
This was ok. I think the Polaroid concept could've been dope but was kinda disappointed with the ending. I know the "shake" is a connection but I think you could've made this hit harder w/o that part, even though it would've been less complex.
I’m in the tub getting sponged down by hoes w/ extravagant skills -
Getting lathered by milfs, while only time u get a backwash is drinking the last of the milk
Decent. Very clean (no pun intended). Maybe my favorite so far.
This frail faggot got Rabdo from lifting, & I gotta see this as weakness
If we seeing Neigh bodybilled … it’s as 'the most feminine physique with a penis'
- I think the "billed" verb is a bit of a stretch in the sense I don't hear anyone using that word in that context ever. So, this didn't do it for me.
& he wonders about his girl’s past. I told em “Neigh she did an orgy”
But the way he denies that Big Bang Theory it could fuel the Creationism story
Eh. Ok. A bit simple.
Stop pretending you’ll land that 6 figure job. We’ve had enough dude
Only reason ur money’s where ur mouth is is cuz ur poor & have a Buck tooth
- I like the buck tooth concept. Pretty good.
& I feel like I gotta tell ya… your girl is carrying my bastard homie
I went from playing tonsil hockey with her to slipping one past the goalie
- Decent. Nothing great, but ok.
Read this multiple times through. You guys are prolly my two favorites right now, but this was kinda a let down. As usual, both of you had great execution and strong connections which make an overall concept significantly better, but there just wasn't the normal dope concepts that I'm used to seeing in your verses. That being said, I think Dom was stronger in that area. I thought IP and Aertraffic were misses for Neigh. Only ones I was feeling were croc and Kleenex. I wasn't feeling bodybilled and Big Bang from Dom but liked them better than Neigh's misses. I liked buck tooth and backwash from Dom. I think he edges this. Super close but I think his concepts were a bit more impactful.
Props, gize.
Dom.
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