[Objective]

You do not yet know yourself, I do. He owes me 20 bucks. I owe him a laugh.
^ Did you give him one? If not, he does not owe you the 20 bucks unless you actually care about ethics and morals tho'.

Also; Death isn't wrapped in a dream, but our dreams are wrapped into our inevitable death. How you decide to perceive the predicament you find yourself in, called life, is simply only a vague indicator to how long you'll survive. Nothing else. I like the concept of you talking to your peers on netcees at the same time trying to make your verse seem personal to each and everyone on this site, or is this simply you venting some thoughts about some patient you had/have, or is this a self-reflective piece where you keep a dialogue with yourself? This is more like a poem imo and it's filled interesting thoughts. Would have been dope if you had went through with some rhymes beside of the first paragraph tbh as the concept and how you executed your ideas was cool. I see the ''I don't need to rhyme cuz y'all know I can'', but even then it doesn't do its justice. I don't know. I'll need to read this again some other time. Keep it up!