[Mr. J]

This was interesting to say the least, a different approach for both verses
I feel like ZYG decided to go a different route than his most recent pieces
which is great, the flow to it was intriguing and kept a decent pace throughout
but then it came across as a children's story, which I'm not against
I'm a fan of Slick Rick, and this had quite an interesting approach
I felt like the story could have had more of a defining moment if you ask me
but it was still great...
Mordycai had a interesting approach as well, one I became fond of towards the end
especially since this was the same approach I thought of doing quite recently
I enjoyed the real life aspect of it, and how you have 2 different characters
yourself and the girl, the anxiety of being stuck in a art museum and perusing
very smooth process if I do say so myself...I enjoyed the piece for what it was
and even though the ending was too abrupt, I felt you conveyed a great aspect

Overall this was a great battle to say the least, you two had different approaches
which works well in battles where you could say more then what is left for you to say
I feel like ZYG's approach was more cartoonish to fit what he had going on with the pic
which worked well, while Mordy went with roaming about an exhibit of sorts
which to me was a great idea, a majority of people want you to go deeper then you did
but you still had a nice approach which I did enjoy....but at the end of the day
only one of you can leave with the W
........I'm going to have to go with ZYG...his piece was more "full"
Mordy you did a great job regardless nice battle fellas
V/ZYG