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Old 11-22-2013, 06:10 PM   #13
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Copy starts off the whole thing well with his signature style and set the standard. Great rhyming, swag & flowing naturally through the verse. Dope shit.

Lars starts off rather in a rather melancholy atmosphere. Nothing that grabbed my attention from the get go, but it picked up extremely fast though and managed to keep the standard and the feel of the collabo as a whole. And I'm looking forward to read what the other people got to offer.

Certain takes grabs the torch and does his thing. Don't really got anything to add than ''it was cool'', some interesting concepts and the closure was pretty dope. Same thing can be applied to Split eights verse altho' his closure was significantly weaker than Certain's imo.

Darth Yoda said some things I didn't really care about until the Nietzsche line, that shit was dope as fuck and opened my eyes to what more he got to say. Btw, that's not how you pronounce Kierkegaard, learn to ''å'' mate! (Two aa's in norwegian/swedish/danish is the same as an ''å'', so that line doesn't really work once you reach people that can pronounce his name correctly (if it is the danish philosopher or whatever you're referring to here) and the ''D'' at the end of his name is silent. I know I'm nitpicking, but it had to be mentioned... The concept was dope tho', just sucks that it doesn't work as it's supposed to. The rest of the verse was allright, wtf @ at the whole birth thing but it was cool enough. Unique to say the least. Overall a decent job that did what it was supposed to.

Overall I enjoyed the fuck outta it. Keep it up, all of you. Peace.
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