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Certain: Thanks a lot for the feed, much appreciated. Definitely get what you're saying! I might have to torture you guys with garbage like this every now and then as I want to add shit to my bag of tricks, when you guys tells me it's wack all I want to do is to write this kind of stuff even more and fix the things I did exceedingly bad. Thanks a lot for the thought out criticism.
Split Eight: Dope that you enjoyed the read! Hopefully these things will be even better in the future.
I'll check out some of your stuff in a few as well.
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