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Old 11-22-2013, 09:51 AM   #17
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neigh: I liked the signature form line a lot. your style is a little too formulaic though, even though it is unique/ strong

mw: dont like how you break up your concepts but the flow/ style is fluid and natural. Lucifer part was corny, not your fault. no standout lines but your writing is obviously developed.

geno: favorite verse of all three. iced out. youre the least corny topical writer in modern history.
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