I think this battle was actually quite close, some of the concepts were a bit obvious from both verses but I can see that there is room for growth from you two. The style has changed from Unfuckwitable I can see he's adapted and took a different approach.. I think for the most part it works for you but you have to make sure the concepts are worded to give you more of a direct hit. Plot your verse was not bad.. Your opponent had a little more on this occasion though..
Vote - UFUCK.
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