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Old 11-21-2013, 10:54 PM   #14
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writing for your account, scrubs, pussy/cat lines are way too played, you also kind of did back to back pussy lines, whether or not they're related...it's kind of redundant. You could've just omitted the word altogether - and the line is really simplistic

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this is close, but in 2013 - i really don't think there's ever an acceptable reason to use a Cat/Pussy line - and that really hurt karaoke's verse for me. Other than that, it was mostly neck and neck..

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