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Originally Posted by Unfukwitable
Plot aka Dystopian
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I viewed your songs & what I heard was the proof
that avenging honest Abe's death couldn't help you murder a Booth
Dope flip here..
It's no need to toss hooks against the crap he's speaking,
I'll just come with enough Pun jabs to over populate a Paki region .
Ha, funny. Not bad.
I Got this down to every nook & cranny fag.. Btw I seen the way his face looks in hairy snatch
So I guess the last time I seen Dys ability in Flat bush wasn't a Brooklyn handicap.
Lol. Creative here.
It's no growth of interest in his lines, It seems he can't advance his skills
So if the plot thickens it's only due to male enhancement pills
Creative, this was nice.
Ray beat phlegm out'em using B+ bars & left his vague speech dimmed
& this drop is more of a Rayge A+... It makes Ye's teeth cringe
(Ray J plus)
Wasn't really feelin this one.
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I liked this verse a lot. The flow was nice and the creativity/flips/wordplay were there. Good read.
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Originally Posted by Plot
You’re a disgrace to humanity son, so I have to clown on you viciously,
And then it's like euthanizing Aids sufferers, wit the ‘unfuckable’ put out of it’s misery.
Good idea, but the wording was off for me.
With a creative artillery, see the gag reflexes as I’m snuffing this joke,
You’ll think your choking vodkas when I get all these screwdrivers stuck in your throat.
Wording again, but this connected.
Weak and pretentious you aint delivering dope, Yo this geeks a pretender,
And Plot’ll get you back pedalling down the street quicker than repeat offenders.
Pretty good here.
Seen your battle in the booth with Phuck Yew, both verses sucked, it was de ja vu,
And it’s got 1 vote in over a month! So I guess Netcees couldn’t give 2 fucks about you.
I liked this play. Good bar.
Give up life man, your no good at it, just lame fake who can’t grasp the game state,
So its time to go ahead and kwit faggot, we can all see it’s the centre of your namesake.
Nah, wasn't feelin this one.
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Not a bad verse, but you had a couple misses in here. I think your wording was your biggest issue in your misses. If you would've worded them a little differently, this would've been a dope battle.
I thought this was a pretty one sided battle. Plot's verse wasn't bad, but the Fuck's wordplay really connected and his wording was better all around. He also really didn't have any misses besides the closer, IMO. Pretty good showing from both of you.
Vote - Un