Nigma, you are most certainly getting better & better as writer. I think everyone should definitely be on the lookout. There have been some very impressive rhyme schemes this week & yours was pretty nice as well. Despite the short lines, you still managed to paint a vivid picture conceptually, and your content was top notch. Unfortunately for you, Black came with a better piece, but that doesn't knock what you did because your piece could beat some of the others this week. dead man, what can I say. Your writing skills are on point, we all know that, and once again it was top notch. But it wasn't your scheme or the clean mechanics that impressed me. What impressed me was the story you put together based on that picture & I must say, I am freaking in awe at what I read. The idea you took molded was nice & the way you were able to mesh the elements in the picture in your piece was the best I've seen this week. And it had to be this type of showing from you, which I'm sure all expected, that had to be done to top what Nigma was able to put together. This was definitely VOTW hands down. Great battle here.
MVGT: dead man.
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