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Old 11-18-2013, 05:33 PM   #2
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This was actually very good. Some lines like the blurring/maturing lines were forced but it was no big deal to me really since I enjoyed the content. This was nice and heartfelt about a man who chose love (family) over wealth and it felt like it had a personal touch. Nice.
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