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Old 11-17-2013, 09:44 PM   #10
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This was a nice battle...pretty sure it was meant to happen
both of you have a distinct style that separates you from other writers
ZYG you often carry a surprising take on a majority of your verses
they always have a different approach from other writers
you seem to think at a different rate from most which is great
a nice verse to showcase your versatility.
DAM you are surprising as well I can see you been doing this for a while
your technical aspect with rhyming is quite...idk the word
I want to say refreshing so lets stick with that
the outcome of your verse really resonates well with the topic
a very direct approach feeling I get from you
very nice work
this battle was interesting nonetheless and picking a winner depends on fluency to me
both great writers in there own right but only one can walk away
and to be truthful I felt like DAM came with a stronger verse
I know it was written on the same or day after ZYG dropped his
but I feel like he captured the idea more thoroughly
nice battle fellas

v/DAM
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