[PancakeBrah]

Vulgar this was a good entry. It was a bit different than your normal style, not as verbose and complex but still expertly written. A couple of your metaphors/similes were a bit corny to me. Flow was good throughout and your knack for rhyming showed through here and there. The content reminded me of something I'd write, albeit the styles differ greatly. I enjoyed it. Mr. J I liked your concept and ending section heaps. Your technique was a bit off for me, though. The rhymes weren't your usual strength and it got to be a bit repetitive until you brought it home. Good battle but I Vulgar had the better execution. v/Vulgar