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Old 11-17-2013, 01:19 AM   #8
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Enjoyed Vulgar's submission more, the three characters were distinct and well developed. The epilogue part was good to bring it together. Mr. J used more symbolic language like the parts about "frozen in time" etc but it still lacked some elements. Voting for Vulgar.
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