Mal you got mad potential, but your verse's ending seemed haphazard and rushed. I got coup taking this one, coup this is the first i read from you, I like how your mind words man.
My walk is called the narrow way, revealing my wounds
By telling the truth as to heal so many hives of ooze
walk in these shoes, feel the amber heart of a dragon
Be a girl interrupted gone phantom, picking apples of Adam
Be the crossroads, see gates of the Great Kingdom
Be trial, be tribulation. Rooted fruits of wisdom
Your glory awaits if you endure to the very end of ends
See tears dried, minds renew, the dead begin to ascend
See what I see standing here in the valley of dry bones
A microphone explodes, no trump silences what is sown...
^real
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Originally Posted by Consensus
The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.
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