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I have to agree. Nigma you are def a dope writer and I loved this following line:

As fog advances on, I look back a day or two
When these vacant ruins portray the tombs
Of the brainless fools labeled humans
Stoned in place, no movement, face in view
Of the great Medusa whose snakes consume you
Cage and noose until you pray for doom


that was excellent insight and smooth writing.


Deadman was just on another level. Black, I am learning you, I see what you do, the abstract imagery metaphor. I have seen many fail at this and yet you succeed. I love the message you convey. Do you know that multinational corporations charge third world citizens a fee to store rain water for bathes and consumption?

conglomerates make billions on their water-refreshments
dolphins were prophets, intellectuals. an honest suggestion
but all that's left is profit margin for another investment
when humanity leaves riverbeds like cracks in a palm
a dolphin won't be worth the leash it's fastened upon.

epic. I am not one for complimenting unless it is meant. other people have called me a genius, I doubt it. People have called you a genius, they are right. I just wish you werent evil/demon possessed....but we will get to that in time.

all in all mvgt deadman.