sick battle guys
Certain - the best verse ive read from you so far imo. you took the flow to the next level. and you had emotion and told a personal story. basically every weakness i could have pointed out in your previous writing , you used as a strength here. sick stuff man. who the fuck are you. this was upper echelon. i hated the visine line btw. felt out of place. and you brought it home by really letting us know that you were talking about Certain. referencing your last two pieces was a good move.
Frank - classic frank. flow was insane. i think what jumps out at me with your verses is the flow, its relentless. it just hits you and keeps hitting you again. the rhyme strings you pull off. the multis are always top notch. best on the board. this was a great verse about a mother cooking thanksgiving dinner and all the emotions that come along with that. from the exhaustion and aggravation to the elation of seeing family members. and the whole back story of the son coming home from jail. you guys both nailed the topic.
overall - man how can i choose between the two. im flip flopping in my mind even as i type this. id give both verses a ten. probably two of the top three favorite verses ive read all season. wtih nycspitz's verse about the tree. im digressing intentionally to give myself more time. franks was longer, which gave us more to chew on. certains was more concise though.
just read them for the third time.
im going with Frank. sorry certain, props for the verse. your top tier now imo
Vote - Frank
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