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Split Eight 's version was cool. but dull probably doesnt like it cause rhymed. but, i can point out a few things, the beginning was cool, the difference between both verses is one let his emotions carry him away, and the other one had a thought process before, and is FINALLY speaking (dull) the other one is more erratic/falling apart,- not to say it was bad, just noting differences. random words thrown out. don't know if satire. hm.