I like most of the changes I noticed. The beginning is better now. I stumbled here with the rhymes:
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mesh it in the blender. spread wings of a strip-teasing angel
poppy seeds ablaze on my poppy seeded bagel
purple Pancakes… no. it’s hard to tell on these opiates
acrylic hand-paint. Eyes swell till they’re poisonous
high as hell, heavens angels are backwards
possibly enabled, an aristocratic homestead
hemorrhagic cokehead. warped in a novelty unlabeled.
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I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.
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