YDK, It kind of feels like you didn't try much here. I felt the emotion in the piece, that was the only evident stand out, but your approach to the topic wasn't something that grasped me. Seemed kind of off & I was expecting better from you. King Ra, I actually heard some members of Wu in your verse, that came natural. Although, one of my takes of your topic was about the Wu but with a diff twist, ha Overall, I see you have improved in rhyming ability. This piece had it's energy & even though it wasn't blowing me away I think you did enough here to win. It's definitely Wu Tang Week here, haha
Vote - King Ra
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