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I liked what you wrote for our collaboration way back two months ago (seems like longer, doesn't it?) more, but this was good. You were straining rhymes much more than you normally do ("graduating"/"back way then" being the biggest offender), but that comes with writing more straightforward content. "Straightforward" sums this up. I thought you could have been a little more clever or a little more emotive or a little more descriptive, but I think you intentionally went about this with a simple, relatable approach.