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Geno-

Was surprised you connected this pic with Jezus as the figure to bask a negative glow against the human orgy below...thus creating a contrast...light and dark, good and bad and the thrill of rebellion. That is creative spin off the topic but it felt like you just put a few ideas in a hat and the first two you drew you used lol...like pin the tale on the donkey, blind folded. see what happens with it, hah,

good sustained flow nice progression. I felt you just rambled on a bit, interesting piece. Nice world created. The piece itself was a glimpse into that...without an beginning nor an end to this, just somewhere in the middle. A very literal pic representation, stating the obvious but in a unique set of circumstances to say the least. Great job here...you did what you had to do.

P-

The opening layout and set up was promising and colorful in this written. I enjoyed this line particularly:

Anything passed it is chemicals roaming your mind

and toward the end

All that's left is the chemical burn and sizzling flashes -

The first two stanzas were hot, and the whole image, chemical imprint/final shot of life as to a camera metaphor was neat, having an almost surgical precision about it.... these two passages complimented each other very well.. Only starting with the third section and closing toward the end I think this piece needed to open up and air out in a more anchored, less micro detailed expose and get to the heart...but to me it just went on in a confusing way...almost unclear and hard to see fit the parts of this as a whole unified piece..pic representation was loose....hard to say in words. all relative and a bit cryptic not knowing how to tie into the topic

vote - Geno