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Old 02-23-2013, 04:31 PM   #6
Sharp
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Originally Posted by mdesanto View Post
Lil late on this, gonna have to key quick.. Gl

You like to act hard, but everybody knows youll never let the glock squeeze
So Ill leave you on ice when these arms raise, like I scored a goal in hockey
dickhair was almost

Wordplay was really strong, just not particularly direct - pretty clean verse and enjoyable read, but there wasn't much in the way of actual punches

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Originally Posted by Dystopian View Post
Where you showed us no talent in battling, just came with straight faggotry,
How the fuck do you have such a checkered history, and not develop any stategy?
Ya styles make-believe, dissing Dys? You aint got the damnedest of chances,
This faggot couldnt even handle rude offences, if he was managing Santas ranches.

Weva..
Checkered past was bonkers, lotb


It was pretty close, desanto definitely has his shit together but wasn't really direct with his lines - last bar was almost, but it wasn't too clear. It was pretty close, but I felt Dystopian had nicer wording, and stronger wordplay, that checkered past would probably be a punch of the week for me even if there were more than two battles

Looking forward to seeing more from both guys, but

V/Dystopian
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