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Originally Posted by Innovator
Can some one or more than one give me an honest critic on
My writing. Like a quick analysis of what present each week.
I would appreciate all 100% blunt honesty.
Thank you.
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you NEED stronger multis, mechanics, schemes...
Your style is often described as "poetic". This is true. However, the subliminal meaning behind this is that your style cannot be described as 'topical'. Oftentimes you rhyme a single syllable or heavily justify your rhymes with slants.... this is bad practice
quite frankly, you are a better writer than me. that is why you champed the RSTL or whatever it was called, and I did not.
however, us Netcees voters are obsessed with the idea of stylistic flair. If you cannot
a) give your verse an authorial voice
b) rhyme (heavily, and perfectly,for multiple syllables)
c) give your verse a unique and distinct take on the topic
Then you won't champ the league.
SRS.