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Swerve · 02-23-2013, 01:43 PM

Bleak - everything felt a little to predictable. Alphabet/Barney...Alpha team/Mr.T....the shank and noob tourney lines I didn't like...the 9 line was okay, but even nein/9 lines have been done. Overall, your wording is solid but you need to work on thinking outside the box more. Get at your tutor about that and see what they say.

Boredom - A lot of played concepts, but your verse was a lot more consistent than Bleaks. I enjoyed the text's future looks bleak line the most, but just like bleak you gotta think outside the box more. However, you did a slightly better job than Bleak so that's why you get the W for me.

Vote - Boredom

02-23-2013, 01:43 PM	#17
Swerve SDub Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,874 Battle Record: 40-34 Champed - Alias Tourney III (Heroes vs. Villians) - Fight Night LXIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 64920327	Bleak - everything felt a little to predictable. Alphabet/Barney...Alpha team/Mr.T....the shank and noob tourney lines I didn't like...the 9 line was okay, but even nein/9 lines have been done. Overall, your wording is solid but you need to work on thinking outside the box more. Get at your tutor about that and see what they say. Boredom - A lot of played concepts, but your verse was a lot more consistent than Bleaks. I enjoyed the text's future looks bleak line the most, but just like bleak you gotta think outside the box more. However, you did a slightly better job than Bleak so that's why you get the W for me. Vote - Boredom __________________ No Cap Gang.