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Old 01-22-2013, 11:40 AM   #7
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Liked it and read it all even though it was long as hell and I rarely do that. Honestly didn't like the hook though. Yall got some great lines in the verses and the hook just comes off weak to me.
To Alli I felt like the opening lines were nice but got weaker as they progressed but still a nice drop. And to Endsane your opening verse was dope but your second verse was dope as hell. Overall this was a nice collab like I said I'd just work on the hook
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