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Objective · 11-13-2013, 12:39 AM

Agreed, thought it was dope. Thought some of the sentences seemed rather choppy, but not a huge problem to the overall impression of your verse. Enjoyed the at times sporadic flow as if it was mirroring you in distress, it's unintentional but that's how I perceived it while reading it. Thought it was a cool drop, keep it up.

11-13-2013, 12:39 AM	#8
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Agreed, thought it was dope. Thought some of the sentences seemed rather choppy, but not a huge problem to the overall impression of your verse. Enjoyed the at times sporadic flow as if it was mirroring you in distress, it's unintentional but that's how I perceived it while reading it. Thought it was a cool drop, keep it up. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o