coup
ok so i dug the reiigious angle you took with this..i thought it had a bit of a poetic nature to it..your language is very vivid and i thought that was cool cuz the picture is a bit vivid. dope shit man. story started out pretty good man it progressed well some lines seemed a bit too abstract or outa place but for the most part it was on point man. dope ending it felt like it brought the kaos of the previous part to a good hault..ill shit bro
malachi
man...tbh that ending was bullshit. you had a dope story going man and i was digging your scheme but when i read that i was like wtf? lol..
Quote:
"OH shit, it was a dream. just a dream."
"Never going to sleep on DMT again."
"Well ima go vote for Malachi on that AOWL match"
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if you would of left this out...the verse would of been dope.
vote- coup