this was a dopw battle
bell
yo i like the angle you took man you took the picture and the first half of your piece you describe the mask in a very detail way..that shit was dope and then you start to dive into the character..at one point thatl ine about going off topic..at first i didnt like it...but then i thought dam that shit really put me there. i felt like at that moment i saw your character sitting down and writing this and being so consumed by this shit that he loses focus.. i mean dam dude this was some fire bro i only wish you would of wrote more. for what it is its dope man no complaints at all..competition sake seems incomplete.
MW
man this was another fucking dope angle on the topic. Star wars? is luke your character? im sorry if im completely off but its offly close. boy slave wins a race wins his freedom..goes off to save a princess lol...either way this shit was fucknig dope like i said before. your rhyme scheme is just flawless man the flow of this is what impressed me tho.. i mean this shit just read so smoothly and it had the hit man, you know lol..that dam this shit is good hahaha. anyway dug the story line bro you developed it nicely and each verse transitions to the next with no problems..great stuff man
overall
ok well tbh honest these where 2 dope piece with really no flaws as far as mechanics go. each competitor droped some memorable lines and each showcased there talents. it came down to who had the longer lating affect. camp had a dope verse with some really smooth rhyming but i felt his piece was too short compared to micks..which came with some fucking fire as well. honestly if camp would of wrote a bit more i think i would of voted for him cuz this could go either way for me . but in the end i got Mick with the vote cuz he dropped and equally dope piece with a better developed storyline..great battle folks.
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