[Geno]

Dope battle.

Camp bell. Came with an interesting approach. Seemed to me like you invented this character at first to be somewhat of a hero. But ultimately you were turned against that decision either forcefully or subconsciously.. still can't figure which. You seemed to stray a little bit and some of your content had a very forced feel to it. It seems like you really struggled conceptually with this piece. Mechanics were poor in some areas and dope in others all in all -I've seen way better from you.

Mike
This was an amazing piece dood. You killed the storyline man. The progression of the life of your character was dope man. I could almost feel what he was going through as I read it. Your no holds barred style worked perfectly here with this plot. The way your character went fromm a young seemingly innocent being/entity into an older one with so much pain until the end... where I got lost a little bit.. the last couple lines felt like they needed,, or were missing a couple details. Almost like you ran out of steam and had to end it before you lost interest.. but none the less. This was a dope read.

This battle is very one sided imo. Camp just didn't bring to the table what I expected to see from him and I got the feel that the topic didn't rub him the right way.

Mike definitely had the reverse effect going on and came through nicely this week.

V-mike wrecka