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Old 11-11-2013, 06:26 PM   #3
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yo nuglet. first part was kinda bland i felt, a bit forced.. idunno what it is with ur verses i been hating on lately sorry hahaa. it just never feels like YOU for some reason.. feels like u tryna be something else. whatever.

more confusion to context to the illusionist process using a concept til the contusions and bruises cause stress and break the defusing of bombs...test 1 2...test 1 2...get it together gumshoe I'm rarely diverted from you...another J and more blunt truth the high scorer you can't compare subs too. basing that out of the trunk too. the forest. the trees and the stumps to..I know...I'm stunned too...Tesla next to a receptor that's unscrewed..I don't know what to tell ya its all in the pressure. the crown and the scepter that sends you to the director. testing....1.....2....that's my Q


^THAAAAAAAAAAAT was dope. my head bobbin cause my neck knows its phat. thats the shit right there

was this ur first "paragraph"? i'm liking all the different ppl trying it now. pretty cool man. i would really like to see u TAKE UR DAMN TIME and WRITE something tho. u been posting everything non stop. slow down. process what ur doing. i feel like ur a way smarter guy than u let on. i wanna see what u can really do. write something, then sleep on it, dont post it!! come back to it the next day and revisit, think about what u like and don't like, then get rid of the shit u dont like.. edit, make changes. i think u could do something super dope if u spent more than 20 mins, uknow??? stay up broseph, peep my boss linguist if u can
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