Staring off in sunsets, Smirnoff is front and
Center when I venture into things I haven’t done yet
dope!
i think this was a nice display of REAL LIFE influencing expression. look man, i'm all for having fun writing. of course its fun if it wasn't none of us would do it in our spare time. i think we just have fun in different ways when it comes down to the art-form. it would be easy for me to write about lighthearted topics and how great i am and whatever. but thats not fun for me to read or write anymore. been there done that. i look at it like this: conflict is the heart of every story. fictional or otherwise. without a conflict, you have a journal entry. you have an event. you can talk about that event. but it's not a story that anybody wants to read.
you are an exceptional rhymer. good rapper. seem like a great dude in all honesty and i envy folks like you who are so adamant about keeping the energy positive.
it was clear that this was harder for you to write than your usual stuff that isn't so focused and isn't so conflicted. but for what it's worth i feel for your situation and based on your character i'm sure you'll be straight on the employment tip within no time.
the line i quoted was my favorite out of the verse. there were others close to quotables but that i think conveyed your struggle to break out into a new job venture and break through your comfort zone very well.
stay up patrick.
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