[Lars]

Man, innovator, this was so terribly unpolished, even with an edit!? Wtf, you coulda smashed this, but it was a chore to read at times, but after figuring out the spelling errors and missing apostrophes, run on lines that you still capitalized at the beginning, etc, I did get a feel for it, but still, the pancake shit was so random and out of place it was off putting as hell... I am disappointed because I think I saw what this could have been, but it was just apparently slapped together

LMAO THIS IS YOU?