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Old 11-10-2013, 11:58 PM   #11
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cool battle. I liked pancake's his was more of a cohesive story. Vulgar's was great too but like others mentioned too much scattered thought. V has a dope mind but this was a lil too abstract for me, I mean artistically I liked it better than pancake's but there were lots of times you just lost me tbh. Like pent mentioned right off the bat catamaran doesn't fit in with the picture and you have this quick flitting energy to the piece that doesn't fit with the pic as well as cake's. For the better story and consistency I'm giving this to cake
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