mr j
I thought you droped a reall smooth piece herethat seemed to flow effortlessly. you had grea word choice thorught out and it really carried that awesome flow through out. I honestly thought the use of your mutis and your abliltiy to have that cohesion withing the story was dope...you rhymed your ass of but at the same time you never forgot the theme and progression of your story. twist was cool and a bit predicable but I enjoyed it a lot so props.
frank.
great story and dope fucking imagery you used the picture and created something from it which I thought that ws cool..a scene, a mood..it was dope to say the least...you packed alor into every line and I thought at times it was very nice but at times it seemed to drag the along and really hault the momentum of the piece...it was cool story great imagery like I said, painting a scdne that really fir the topic...cool shit man.
overall tho I think I like Js verse a bit more I thought tho his line was much shorter than franks he seemed to pack just as much content as frank did..both dropped some evilly dope shit but I think J mechanics and storyline took thid for me.
J
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