This should be battle of the week.
Vivid, you owe me for giving you background on that picture. I think it won you the round here.
Patrown had the more technically impressive verse. I loved the flow, the wording, the subject matter, and the story that was told. I did not make any connection whatsoever to the topic at hand, though.
Vivid told a great story from both perspectives. Some may knock a straightforward approach, but I think here, it suited his style of narrative particularly well. It read like a stage play - the call and answer technique was spectacular.
If patrown made me connect with the picture at all, I'd have to call it a near draw.. but he didn't. Maybe I missed something. Great story, but unrelated to what I see on my screen at the top of the page.
vote - Vividlyvague
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